Nice job linking all of the texts together. The connections between each will certainly be helpful when writing the essay. I really like how you were able to show different ends of the spectrum on one idea at a time.
Woah! I really think that the web was a great strategy for brainstorming. I like how you related many interesting ideas between the two authors. It never occurred to me that Dalai Lama was a valid relation between the two pieces of writing.
Nice job linking all of the texts together. The connections between each will certainly be helpful when writing the essay. I really like how you were able to show different ends of the spectrum on one idea at a time.
Woah! I really think that the web was a great strategy for brainstorming. I like how you related many interesting ideas between the two authors. It never occurred to me that Dalai Lama was a valid relation between the two pieces of writing.
Great work! I like how you centered your “brainstorming” on a question. I also think it was a helpful move to organize by idea/topic. Great work!